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The setting in the novel "Fahrenheit 451" by Ray Bradbury is
the vacuum-underground which is mostly black and dark, (p.99, l.14), and
the underground is the dead cellar of town (p.100, l4-5). The trapping
rhytm of Denhams Dentifrice in the suction train has the same dark effect.
In the underground the atmosphere is hectic, mostly there is confusion,
chaos, madness or insanity and noise. Montag is carrying the Bible open
and reading the book, (p.100, l.7). In "Fahrenheit 451" Bradbury
employs the symbol of religion. Furthermore Bradbury utilises methaphors
in line 17, page.102,
( The train vanished in its hole ). In line 6, page 100 Bradbury employs
personification.
Bradbury utilises repetition, (p.101, l.15-17) in the novel. Serap
Y.
Well, Bradbury uses different ways of point of view to show the reader
all kinds of feelings.
For example he uses the thoughts of Montag which we can see on page 101,
line 13-17. That's exactly one of the scenes which show the reader how
confused Montag is or how confused his reflections are. His mind changes
between two thoughts simultaneously (Denham's Dentifrice lilies
of the field).
On page 99 line 23 till page 100 line 3 Bradbury narrates how Montag is
memorizing his childhood and that allows us to look into his head and
feelings.
The next example of internal point of view used by Bradbury is the feeling
of Montag which we can find on page 99, in line 12. He feels for example
numbness or we can read the sentences (
) feel his throat go
raw with air (line 15 page 102).
Bradbury also uses many stylistic devices. Here we can see that he uses
alliteration like on page 99 in line 15 (take time).
He also uses repetition on page 100 in line 23. He repeats words like
shut up, shut up,that show us how angry and confused
Montag is.
He also uses metaphors as well, like on page 101 in line 5 a fierce
whisper of hot sand through an empty sieve. Finally he uses enumerations
that we can find on page 100 in line 1 his hands were tired,the
sand was boiling,the sieve was empty.
At last we have a look at the setting. By setting we can see that he feels
hectic and confused. He is on the subway and it's very loud there . Even
the colour is like the atmosphere (black,dark line 13-14 page 99).
There are different kinds of sounds, for example a whispering and
tapping feet (page 101 line 14).
to the rythm of Denham's Dentifrice.
On page 101 line 15-18 we can see clearly how confused Montag is,he cannot
really order his mind.
Kathi
O.S.
In the tube scene we can see what Montag thinks and feels. He feels numbness
(p99,l12,13). He feels confusion. He memorizes his childhood. He is carrying
the Bible open. All this is in black,dark colours. The vacuum-underground
rushes him through the dead cellars of town, jolting him. He hears a train
radio.
N.S.
Bradbury expresses confusion and alienation by using the setting of a
subway. There it is dark (l.13-14,p.99). And darkness means loneliness
and isolation. He also adds frightening sounds like a cry (l.9), a loud
car (l.11); all this creates fear. In the text you can understand Montag`s
feelings and thoughts(l.4-5,p.100) as the vacuum underground rushes him
through the dead cellars of town. At next Bradbury shows Montag`s confusion(l.9)
by an internal point of view the silly thought came to him
and Montag believes when he reads fast that maybe all the sand will stay
in the sieve. This expresses Montag`s confused thoughts. Another example
of internal point of view mirrors Montag`s alienation, can be found in
lines 15-20, when he thinks that he is lost without his old face, hands
and even his smile. The author also employs some stylistic devices like
repetition (p.100, l.23)" shut up" and enumeration(p.100, l.1)"
the sand was boiling,the sieve was empty", to make clear how Montag
really feels.
Ilka W.
Analyse how Bradbury uses point of view, stylistic devices and setting
to express confusion and alienation in the tube scene.
Bradbury chooses the setting of the subway for this scene. The story
is told by a third person narrator, and the reader is able to identify
himself with Montag by the usage of the internal point of view. Bradbury
chooses the subway-setting because of its darkness and he uses words like
´numbness´ (l. 12), to show Montag´s confusion and emptiness.
The only real colours in this scene can be found in the passage of Montag´s
memory about a situation in his childhood. The `yellow dune´(l.32)
and the ´blue (
) summer day´( l.24 ), but there are
also the `empty sieve´(l.1 p.100) and the tears´ which underline
his sadness (l.3). He reads the Bible on the subway and compares his memories
with the desperate try to memorize each line of the Bible. He can´t
concentrate because of the loudness. His thoughts always change between
´Denhams Dentifrice`(l.17 ff) and the lines ``Consider the lilies
of the field´´ ( l. 18 ff), which he reads in the Bible. Bradbury
also uses a bit of external view by describing the subway´s inhabitants´
impressions about Montag, his outward appearonce and behaviour. "the
shocked inhabitants [
] moving back from this man with the insane,
gorged face , the gibbering, dry mouth, the flapping book in his fist"
(l. 10-13). Bradbury also uses a lot of stylistic devices, likme alliterations
"take time" (p.99 l. 15), " someone somewhere" (l.16),
repetitions " shut up, shut up" (p.100 l.23) " Denham´s
Dentifrice" ( p.100 l. 17- p.101 l.19 ), personifications- the, whispering"
sand (p.99 l.26) and metaphors " a fierce whisper of hot sand"
(p.100 l.5), to underline Montag´s thoughts and feelings.
Analyse how Bradbury uses point of viewe,stylistic devices and setteing
to express confusion and alienation in the tube scene.
Ray Bradbury uses many stylistic devices, elements pf setting and different
narrative
perspetives to expres confusion and alienation in the tube scene.
So, in line 13-14 on page 99 he uses a comparison as a stylistic device
to make things
better understandable. They have always a hammering effect. An aliteration
for example,
like on page 101line 15, shows the character in a hectic situation. Even
the setting and
narrative perspective can give an information about thoughts, memories
and feelings.
on page 100 line 7, " He was carrying the bible open. " On page
99, line 21 the author chooses a dark place, a tunel to express a feeling
of the character.
DENIZ M.
Bradbury uses point of view, stylistic devices and setting to express
confusion and alienation in the tube scene. Bradbury shows us the thoughts
of Montag. We can see Montag´s thoughts. Bradbury opens a window
into Montag`s mind. We can know about Montag`s thoughts(l.12-14 p.99).
But at the same time we can see Montag`s memorizing(l.23 p.99 or l.3 p.100)
and Montag`s feelings (l.12 p.99). Now the reader knows how Montag feels
or thinks and how the setting expresses confusion and alienation.
Bradbury describes the place, the colour and the sounds to express confusion
and alienation. Bradbury chooses the subway as a place for this scene.
He describes this scene with the colours black and dark (l. 13-14 p.99).
These colours create a depressing atmosphere. Bradbury chooses special
sounds ( l.27 p.99 or l. 9 p.99) for example a cry, a whispering or a
tapping of feet.
Also he uses stylistic devices to have more expression. He uses alliteration
( l.15 p. 99), repetition ( l.23 p.100), enumeration (l.1 p.100) and metaphor
(l. 5 p.100).
All these things express confusion and alienation.
Mariam

In the subway
scene Bradbury uses the point of view of Montag to show his confusion.
It is very emotional, so that the reader can identify with Montag and
feels sympathy with him. In this scene Montag feels numb. He remembers
a situation of his childhood, when he tried to fill a sieve with sand.
He compares this situation with his actual situation, where he wants to
remember every line of the bible. But he isn't able to concentrate because
of the announcements from the train radio. He sees the subway as a trap
of commercials where nobody can escape from. He wants to get back his
old life and hopes somebody can help him. The external observer describes
the scene neutrally and gives the necessary information to follow the
story. The scene takes place in the subway. It is a dark place and the
electric light creates coldness. The description of the subway is very
metaphorical. A big part of the atmosphere is created by the sound. With
the comparison between the subway and a snake, the train gets the impression
of being threatening. With "a cry" (p.102/l.6), "a whisper"
(p.102/l.8) or "passengers screaming" (p.102/l.11) he shows
sadness, fear and helplessness. There are many stylistic devices, especially
to support the emotional internal point of view of Montag. The continous
repetitionof the word "dentifrice" underlines the anger of Montag
that he can't concentrate because of the announcements. The repetition
"darkness, more darkness" (p.99/l.21) supports the dark atmosphere.
With the symbol of a "vomiting train radio"(p.101/l.20)he wants
to show that in Montag's opinion the radio only makes negative sounds,
he doesn't want to hear. The sentences that are used are often very short.
For example the repetition "shut up" by Montag. This is used
to underline Montag's anger about the announcements. There are also many
enumerations to help the reader to get a better imagination of the whole
scene. So the stylistic devices are mainly used to amplify the emotion
of Montag to support the reader's imagination or to underline the setting.
The place shows the dark and disturbing reality Montag is forced to live
in. Here the sound is the main element. At last the internal point of
view mainly is used to express Montag's feelings, thoughts, wishes and
hopes which are only supported by setting and stylistic devices. (Schubert)
In the subway scene of his novel " Fahrenheit 451", Ray Bradbury
uses the point of view of Montag to express confusion and alienation.
When you look at Montag's internal point of view, it is very emotional.
The reader identifies and sympathizes with Montag. In this scene Montag
feels numb and remembers his childhood. He tries to fill a sieve with
sand. These aspects produce feelings in the reader's mind.
He compares the situation of his childhood with his actual situation and
wants to remember every line of the book.
The point is that he isn't able to concentrate because of announcements.
Montag sees the subway as a trap of commercials where the people are pounded
into submission.
Montag wants to get back his old life.
The external observer looks neutrally at the scene. He gives information
on Montag's situation and produces a rational understanding of the scene.
The scene takes place in the subway.
The dark scene with the electric light amplifies the feeling of coldness
and isolation.
Sounds like the train radio vomitting on Montag and the train door that
whistles open amplify the internal conflict of Montag. The description
of the subway is quite metaphorical.
Things like "a cry" (p. 102,l. 6) or "a whisper" (p.
102,l. 7) amplify the dark and cold atmosphere in the subway.
When you look at the stylistic devices, there are a lot of repetitions
in this scene, "Dentifrice, Dentifrice" (p.101,l. 19) or the
"the smile...in smile" explain Montag's confusion in this scene.
Images for example "His hand were tired" or "like kicking
a buried mine" (p.99,l.14) give an imagination of Montag's internal
conflict and confusion. The enumerations in this scene like "The
subway fled past him" (p.99,l.19-22)or "Trumpets blared"
(p.100,l.16-17) show that his mind is totally confused and bewildered.
(Fiedler )
Bradbury uses point of view to underlin the confusion of Montag. First
Montag feels numb (p.99;l.12). This shows in what state of mind Montag
is.
Then Bradbury compares his actual situation with a situation of his childhood.
Once Montag remembers his childhood in a situation with a sieve (p.99;ll.23
- p.100;l.3) and he compares that with his actual situation when he is
sitting on the subway trying to remember every line of the book (.100;
ll.13-14). For the reader this is a very emotional moment and he is able
to identify himself with Montag. After this Montag can't concentrate because
of anouncements on the subway (p.100;l.19/p.100 l.23/p. 101;l.9).
Next Bradbury uses Montag's thoughts to explain the subway as a trap of
commercials (p. 101; ll.22-24). So the reader gets a deeper look into
the plot. In addition Montag wants to get back his former life (p.89;ll.
16-19). In this way he gets sympathy with Montag. Bradbury uses external
point of view to give the reader a neutral information on Montag's situation
and helps with a rational understanding in the story.
The scene takes place on the subway and is very dark. With the electric
light Bradbury wants to create coldness. When Bradbury describes the place
he uses a lot of images and metaphors. This helps the reader to imagine
and so he is able to make his own impression of the circumstances and
place. When "trumpets blared" (p.100; l.16) Bradbury supports
the impression of Montag's confusion
Another example of this fact is when "the train radio vomits upon
Montag"(p.101;ll.14-20). This makes clear what negative sounds are
around Montag.
Often in the scene description of place and stylistic devices are connected.
For example "the train hissed like a snake"(p102;ll.16-17).
On the one hand Bradbury describes the train and on the other hand he
uses a symbol. This gives the reader an impression of the situation. At
the beginning of the scene Bradbury uses an alliteration "Someone,somewhere"
(p.99;ll.15-16) to show that Montag remembers his former life. Otherwise
Bradbury uses images to amplify emotions and imaginations of the reader.
The syntax in this scene is quite different. Sometimes Bradbury uses one-word-sentences
(p.100;l.18) to support his anger. In the beginning of the scene Montag
asks himself questions (p.99;ll.12-23). This shows the confusion and numbness
of Montag.
All in all Bradbury uses a lot of stylistic devices to make Montag's feelings
and thoughts clear . In addition he uses external point of view very specifically
to underline his confusion and alienation.
Obernsiek
Analyze how Bradbury uses point of view, setting and stylistic devices
to express confusion and alienation in the subway scene.
At first Bradbury uses an internal point of view to express confusion
and alienation of Guy Montag. Guy Montag, the protagonist of the novel
sits in the subway and feels numb(s.p.99/l.12). He remembers a situation
of his childhood. As a child, sitting on a dune, he tried to fill sand
into a sieve(s.p.99/l.23-p.100/l.3). Now, he reads a passage of the bible
and wants to remember every line of this book(s.p.100/l.13-14). But he
can´t concentrate because of announcements in the subway train(on
p.100/l.23 and p.101/l.9). Therefore the subway is a symbol of commercial
life(s.p.101/l.22-24). Thus the internal aspects like memories, thoughts
and reflections of Montag produce a very emotional atmosphere and the
reader has sympathy with Montag. Beyond it there are neutral infos about
Montag´s situation.
Besides that there are a lot of stylistic devices which increase emotion
and imagination. For example there are repetitions like `someone, somewhere´or
`Dentifrice, Dentifrice´(p.99/l.15-16 and p.101/l.19). In addition
to that there are images of a pillbox like `a buried mine´(s.p.99/l.14)
or `the dead cellars of town´(s.p.100/l.5). These are metaphors
for the alienation of human beings in a technological environment. The
general use of short or even one word syntax amplifies the atmosphere
of a rush. Ray Bradbury explains the identity crisis of the fireman Guy
Montag. The narrator shows Montag as an isolated person in a subway line.
The subway train expresses a dangerous animal like a hissing snake(compare
p.102/l.17). As well the train radio `vomits upon Montag`(p.101/l.20).
This is a personification of technology and expresses cold alienation.
Bradbury uses internal and external point of view in the subway scene.
The internal one pouduces very emotional identification and sympathy with
Montag, while the external one is very neutral, so they give us information
on Montag's situation. The internal point of view is for example used
when he is in the subway, he feels numb (p.99/line 22) or remembers when
he was a child (p.99/line 23 - p.100/line 3).
The external point of view is used in the sentence "he clenched the
book in his fists" (p.100/line 15). Bradbury also uses many elements
of setting mostly while he describes the place or when Montag hears sounds.
For example "subway" (p.99/line 19-22) or "trumpets blared"
(p. 100/line 16). He uses very many stylistic devices in the subway scene.
He uses repetitions, images and has general syntax. Montag is very confused
in the subway scene , he wants to read a book, but he cannot do this because
the announcements disturb him and the repetition used makes this clear
for example. "Dentifrice. Dentifrice" (p.101/line 19). The images
are for example "His hands were tired" (p.100/line 1) or "like
kicking a buried mine" (p.99/line 14). In his syntax Bradbury uses
very many short sentences and sometimes even one word syntax (p.99/line
11-12). Furthermore he uses questions (p.99/line 12 + 13). You find enumerations
in his syntax for example on page 99 in line 19-22 "The subway fled
past him".
All in all the point of view, setting and stylistic devices make the confusion
and the hectic of Montag clear.
At first Bradbury uses an internal point of view to express confusion
and alienation of Guy Montag.
Guy Montag, the protagonist of the novel sits in the subway
and feels numb.He remembers a situation of this childhood.
As a child ,sitting on a dune, he tried to fill sand into a sieve. Now,
he reads a passage of the bible and wants to remember every line of this
book.But he cannot concentrate
because of announcements in the subway train.Therefore the subway is a
symbol of a commercial life.
Besides that there are a lot of stylistic devices which
increase emotion and imagination.
For example there are repetitons like "someone,somewhere".
In addition to that there are images of a pillbox like "a buried
mine" or "the dead cellars of town".These are metaphors
for the alienation of human beings in a technological environment.
Point out the negative aspects of society values, media consumption and
human relationships Bradbury fictionalises in ´Fahrenheit 451`.
Ray Bradbury´s novel shows the negative aspects of an inhuman world.
At first(and mainly) the fireman Guy Montag burns books. It´s forbidden
to read books. The people don´t enjoy nature and they have no meaningful
conversations. They live under total control. The government makes the
rules of media consumption and human relationships. Consequently the inhabitants
of this world can´t realize an independent thinking. For example
Guy Montag´s wife Mildred is watching TV and listening to a seashell
radio at the same time. The TV is interactive, that means that the audience
can play a role in a show named ´The Family`. That shows that TV
consumption is better than company. Besides that the protagonists of this
novel are living in a world that informs and betrays other people. There
is superficiality as well as anonymity and alienation. Bradbury stresses
the problems of modern life in particular the inhuman qualitiy of an atomic
war. He makes references to the German Nazi Regime and the USA of the
McCarthy period. Bradbury´s fictional world is a world without love
and understanding and many suicides, drugs and emptiness.
Bradbury uses point of view to show the confusion of Montag. First Montag
feels numb (p.99/l.12); he wants the numbness to go away. He compares
his actual situation with a situation of his childhood and he remembers
his childhood (p.99/l.23 - p.100/l.3). Montag wants to read but he can´t
concentrate because of the announcements in the subway (p.100/l18,p.100/l.23,p.101/l.9).
The last two facts I´ve written about are very emotional. The reader
develops identification or sympathy with Montag. He wants to get back
his old life (p.99/l.16-19) because he feels numb. The subway is shown
as a trap of commercials (p.101/l.22-24) they can´t run away from
the subways and they can´t run away from the announcements. The
setting of this scene are the subway or the subwayline (p.99/l.19-22).
In the subway train the trumpets blare (p.100/l. 16) before the announcements
in the subway come. The train radio vomits upon Montag (p.101/l.19-20)
and plays some kind of music with metal sounds (p.101/l.21). At the end
this scene is dark. Montag hears "a cry" (p.102/l.6), then "a
whisper" (p.102/l.7); he passes the train door "whistling open"
(p.102/l.9) and he runs through the white tiles up through the tunnels
(p.102/l.12-13). The coldness in this dark scene is created by the electric
lights used.
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